What a beautiful story!
Posted by: Julie at March 8, 2009 1:05 PMI now want more. What's next?
Is it sad because he's dying, or is it frightening because she's a psychokiller?
Posted by: Patti M. at March 8, 2009 4:28 PMIf it was a first date, I'd totally assume I wouldn't be having a second date. (Or probably a first with anyone else)
Posted by: Gary LaPointe at March 8, 2009 5:16 PMWho's to say she's a psycho? Maybe he deserves it.
Posted by: Bull at March 8, 2009 9:45 PMThe psychokiller angle seems more interesting, but if it's a revenge killing because he truly deserves to die, that would be intersting, too.
James, please write more. Kthanksbye.
Posted by: Patti M. at March 9, 2009 8:24 AMI've written a sequel:
Faces, smiling and quizzical, stared back at her in the old photos from beneath her small, wrinkled hands.
The memories calmed her; memories as gentle as those hands.
She closed the photo album and returned it to its box underneath the bed.
Posted by: James at March 9, 2009 9:15 AMOOOOooooh...end of life mercy killing maybe?
But that would imply they were long known to each other, and I don't get that from Part I.
Posted by: Bull at March 9, 2009 10:39 AMBull - it could also mean that she is a serial killer and does this often. She takes comfort in the faces of her past victims...
Posted by: briwei at March 9, 2009 11:50 AMOh, Brian, I love it. Nice 'n' creepy!
Posted by: Patti M. at March 9, 2009 11:54 AMNot sure what it says that serial killer came to mind before mercy killer.
Posted by: briwei at March 9, 2009 12:27 PMYes, that too.
This reminds me of a short story I read in (middle?) school about an elderly lady who ran a boarding house and did a similar thing to young male guests who checked in. In the story she poisened their tea (not coffee) with cyanide that supposedly tastes like bitter almonds.
Posted by: Bull at March 9, 2009 1:13 PMYou're thinking of "Arsenic and Old Lace," a great movie (maybe you read the play?).
Posted by: Patti M. at March 9, 2009 1:30 PMNeither saw the movie nor read the play. It was definitely a short story in a scholastic-type reader; probably adapted.
Posted by: Bull at March 9, 2009 4:35 PMThey were old men with pensions in "Arsenic and Old Lace." That's what came to mind for me as well, but it sounds like a similar idea but a different story.
Posted by: James at March 9, 2009 4:44 PMfunny, I'm usually the morbid one, but this time I just thought of it as simply existential. A simple observation that everyone dies and likes to be remembered. So I found it to be a touching gesture. It also becomes a self contained short story that way.
But, hey, the serial killer thing is cool, too.
Posted by: Rui at March 13, 2009 11:43 PM